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What do you think of this track?
davidmclean
PostPosted: 21 September 2010 - 23:17:12 (011)  Reply with quote
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Can you please tell me what you think of this track?:

http://soundcloud.com/david-mclean/purification

Thank you, David.
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PostPosted: 22 September 2010 - 03:02:35 (168)  Reply with quote
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This sounds nice happy Maybe you just need to check the volumes and a little bit of equalization and compression but I think it sounds nice otherwise thumbsup
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PostPosted: 23 September 2010 - 02:09:35 (131)  Reply with quote
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The sweep noise at 0:56 gets too loud in the extreme treble frequencies. I would suggest turning this down and/or EQing it.

The synth at 2:00 gets too loud also.

The bass string in the break sounds like it could be louder too.

3:27 has the same extreme treble problem as before.

I don't hear much of the bassline, you could try boosting it around 156 Hz or a bit lower, and also an octave above that (doubling of frequency).

And of course you'll want to increase the fade at the end instead of having it cut off like that.

Otherwise it sounds very clinical and with not much warmth. Try running it through a warming mastering processor, or see about changing your EQs and compressors for more analogue-styled ones. Not necessarily all, but having a selection of different ones always helps.

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wess
PostPosted: 23 September 2010 - 02:29:08 (145)  Reply with quote
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Sounds too much like Andy Blueman.
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PostPosted: 23 September 2010 - 20:13:31 (884)  Reply with quote
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the frequency of certain sounds in the high area need fixing, also the track could use more bass. liking the tracks energy.

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